TheUnnamedhero

VERSE 1
these raised scars sting
beneath my skin
dim light of stars
just fade away

like thoughts of you
that ive lost
as the leaves from a tree
bury me alive

BRIDGE
why cant i
cant i turn this around

CHORUS
take a look at me
to turn your eyes away
for you can never see
can never see into me

VERSE 2
now the cool of night
it brings me back
now i let the knife
that burns my skin

be wheighted by the sound
of your screaming voice
your words still have not
lost their meaning

BRIDGE
why cant i
cant i turn this around

CHORUS
take a look at me
to turn your eyes away
for you can never see
can never see into me

BREAKDOWN
searching
within myself

to find
all my thoughts

when i
come to find

its you
whos faulted

OUTRO VERSE
ive looked in myself
to fix these faults
now ive come to see
youre my only fault

good-bye

elizabeth_472

Good job! It really looks like a good song!

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TheUnnamedhero

Thank you, are there any other comments? i need critique. thank you.