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Old 10-16-2004, 12:21 PM   #1
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[Verse 1]
My lips are dry
My feet are wet
You're not talking, I'll bet
That it has something to do
With last night
Doing what you can't tell me
Telling me what you don't know
Open up your tattered mind
Please let me inside

[Chorus]
What is it about me
That makes you scream
What is it
That makes you want to leave
Dry times
Good times
Just leave it all behind

[Verse 2]
Is it so hard to tell me
What you see
Or should I live a lie
That I will never be
Or do you care at all
Why do I never listen to that
Haunting voice inside my head
Maybe you just wish I were dead

[Chorus]
What is it about me
That makes you scream
What is it
That makes you want to leave
Dry times
Good times
Just leave it all behind

[Verse 3]
Now I remember the part of me
That wanted to stay away
From careless love
I do what I can, but still
I can't hear you
And you can't hear me
Oh please tell me what you see

[Chorus] (x2)
What is it about me
That makes you scream
What is it
That makes you want to leave
Dry times
Good times
Just leave it all behind

What do you think?
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Old 10-16-2004, 08:04 PM   #2
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its interesting, Iwish I could give an opinion but i'm not very good at doing so. I liked it though .
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Old 10-16-2004, 08:14 PM   #3
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I liked it. Nice and complete.
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