thamior

I'm back again, for some reason though no ones taking to reveiwng my stuff, t can't be its too good or bad, then people would comment so I figure its average, well i'll keep striking till I hit one.

Do you think you know who I am?
Do you think you know what i've got?
But I can see you don't understand.
You've no perception as to what i'm not.

Chorus:
But do you think you know me?
Can you see what I seee?
Do you have what it takes,
to know my thought?
And know what I am,
and what i'm not.

Yo uthink your right,
But I tell you your wrong.
You think you've some insight,
But its just the same old song.

*repeat chorus*

You don't know who I am,
or what I want to be.
I dont think you give a damn.
As to what I see.

*repeat chorus*

Do you know me?

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Demiurgos

Hm...I liked the previous one "Song - untitled" better. I just have the impresion that with the former song there was something more going on in your mind when you were writing it. But, just an idea on my part.

By the way, this song seems more to me as if it's something you were contemplating about while taking that long walk on the road depicted in the previous song, if you can understand me. It's kind of a sequel to me.

thamior

hmm, If I remeber correctly I actually wrote this one first, but they were written at the same time so thats why you may have formed that idea. As for liking the other one yea I do too, im tryiung to write songs again though i've been on a streak of not doing so, im bound to turn out ones that arent good.

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Demiurgos

Well, you know what the old wise man said: "The repetition is the mother of learning."

Keep trying and you'll get there.