Shi-oo

I wrote this last weekend. I was on a music-composition streak (made 6 instrumentals in 2 days) and decided I should write lyrics to them. My homepage has the instrumental mp3s for this and the other compositions if anybody's interested.

Let me know what you all think.


Inuantuv

Verse 1
Your eyes
Make me sigh
Can you see
Through me
Do you know that
you aren't here?

Verse 2
I live here, in this, isolation
Dreams comfort me but make me
cry and cry, cause all I want is
your company to be true

Chorus
All I wanted was a little love from you
is that so much to ask? tell me
Is it so much to want..
Just your kiss your touch your love your desire
to be real...inuantuv...

Verse 3
Your touch
means so much
That without
you all I have
are tears and yet
I know you're a dream

Verse 4
Your words
make me swoon
Self-conceived
as they may be
But tell me would
You be real for me?

Verse 5
I love you, though I'm really alone
You comfort me but you are
a lie, a lie, cause all you are is
a dream but one I wish were true

Chorus Repeat 2x

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thamior

its nice, but is it sung fast or slow im not getting any kind of beat from it. However im assuming it was fast in which case it works well.

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Shi-oo

Actually it's pretty slow. The lyrics almost completely go along with a slow, dramatic flute line. Slow slow ::cough:: If you heard the mp3 you'd see what I mean.

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(So I'm a drama queer...so sue me)