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Old 10-01-2004, 05:14 AM   #1
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Beeswing
Floating on a Feather

Floating on a Feather

Verse 1

I知 floating on a feather
No longer knowing whether I am mad or sane
My senses are a shimmer
Reality grows dimmer, I知 on another plane
My body has no shape or form
I知 writhing to the rhythm of a cosmic storm

Verse 2

I知 flying to forever
I知 trying to be clever but my mind has gone
My memory delivers
A crescendo of a shiver from a long forgotten song
I知 gazing through a galaxy
Of starry-hearted mirrors to a magic sea

Chorus

Floating on a feather
And I wanna float forever
Don稚 want to ever land
I値l dance with you among the stars
Romance with you a while on Mars
Then on to Never-Never Land


Bridge

Never thought that it could ever be this way
Until you taught me to believe that I could leave
Just feel my body lift and drift away
I知 floating on a feather
Suspended in a never-ending glow
Smiling at a tiny world a million miles below

Chorus

Floating on a feather
And I知 gonna float forever
Don稚 want to ever land
I値l dance with you among the stars
Romance with you a while on Mars
Then on to Never-Never Land

Copyright ゥ September 2004 by D Rulliere
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Old 04-29-2005, 06:40 AM   #2
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I thought this was really nice, the rhyming in the verses is excellent and the chorus really makes the song.

I don't know why nobody has commented on this!

Great job!
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