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09-23-2004, 07:25 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Port Townsend, WA
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First post. Song: Cynical
Cynical
We raise towards the day
Ideas lost away
Our fear holds us home
Our tears cold and worn
Chorus:
It’s cynical anywhere you try
It’s cynical anywhere you cry
It’s cynical anywhere you try
It’s cynical anywhere why
I hold it back
Soon it will crack
Creation soul and mind
Illusion left behind
Chorus:
Some aren’t inclined
Left lost and blind
The pain will last long
Love will push on
Chorus:
That's it. Hope you guys can help. Not sure what everyone here likes to listen to, but it's got a Radiohead influence.
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09-23-2004, 07:30 PM
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Profound Writer
Join Date: Sep 2004
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Niiiice. It flows.
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09-23-2004, 08:01 PM
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Thanks. I wish I could play it for you. I'm quite proud of the sound of it.
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09-23-2004, 11:51 PM
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Ink Slinger
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You need a recording system (OGM)* and a website to put it on ^^. What? Expenses? Hmmm...
[ot:1f627ac24e]Apparently OGM stands for Outrageously Ghetto Microphne, Organic Growers of Michigan, something in Spanish, a program extension, and Ogg Media, amoung other things.[/ot:1f627ac24e]
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Bobo the Goat
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09-24-2004, 12:51 AM
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Originally Posted by bobothegoat
You need a recording system (OGM)* and a website to put it on ^^. What? Expenses? Hmmm...
[ot:f874762549]Apparently OGM stands for Outrageously Ghetto Microphne, Organic Growers of Michigan, something in Spanish, a program extension, and Ogg Media, amoung other things.[/ot:f874762549]
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I might just get one. Do you have any example of songs or something so I can hear the quality? Well thanks for the advice anyways.
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09-24-2004, 04:13 AM
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Wordsmith
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hmm,m it would i I could understand it as some of the rhymes seem out of place but perhaps thats because I have no clue what its about.
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