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09-17-2004, 02:23 PM
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Nothing and No One
First song for my ska band...enjoy.
Nothing and No One
The days have come, the nights no more,
Spent them on my bathroom floor.
The tub was a cage where I would lay,
Wodering how I created this fray.
Thom is gone and so is Jack,
So I ran off with that kid in black.
But then I found out about Nick,
Tried Jason, Zach, and even Rick.
Yet one of them ever seemed to do,
No, nothing compared to you...
I hope you haven't forgotten me,
Cause I held hands with someone new.
And I hope you soon find out,
That no one compares to you.
I spent the other night with Chris,
Refusing to touch or move or kiss.
All I ever wanted from them was more,
A relentless addiction that has no cure.
I remember basking in Eric's embrace,
Looking up at Jake yet seeing your face.
Yet one of them ever seemed to do,
No, nothing compared to you...
I hope you haven't forgotten me,
Cause I held hands with someone new.
And I hope you soon find out,
That no one compares to you.
Now I'm stuck, waiting, in the dark,
Found Adam bloody in the park.
Surrounded by many, yet so alone,
Knowing that dan or Mark is on the phone.
Yet one of them ever seemed to do,
No, nothing compared to you...
I hope you haven't forgotten me,
Cause I held hands with someone new.
And I hope you soon find out,
That no one compares to you.
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09-17-2004, 03:39 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Carribean
Gender: Male
Posts: 2,460
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Re: Nothing and No One
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Originally Posted by Arsenic Syringes
First song for my ska band...enjoy.
Nothing and No One
The days have come, the nights no more,
Spent them on my bathroom floor.
The tub wasa cage where I would lay,
Wodering how I created this fray.
Thom is gone and so is Jack,
So I ran off with that kid in black.
But then I found out about Nick,
Tried Jason, Zach, and even Rick.
Yet one of them ever seemed to do,
No, nothing compared to you...
I hope you haven't forgotten me,
Cause I held hands with someone new.
And I hope you soon find out,
That no one compares to you.
I spent the other night with Chris,
Refusing to touch or move or kiss.
All I ever wanted from them was more,
A relentless addiction that has no cure.
I remember basking in Eric's embrace,
Looking up at Jake yet seeing your face.
Yet one of them ever seemed to do,
No, nothing compared to you...
I hope you haven't forgotten me,
Cause I held hands with someone new.
And I hope you soon find out,
That no one compares to you.
Now I'm stuck, waiting, in the dark,
Found Adam bloody in the park.
Surrounded by many, yet so alone,
Knowing that dan or Mark is on the phone.
Yet one of them ever seemed to do,
No, nothing compared to you...
I hope you haven't forgotten me,
Cause I held hands with someone new.
And I hope you soon find out,
That no one compares to you.
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What genre is this supposed to be?
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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09-17-2004, 03:42 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: wherever I wish it to be
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this is very strange i must admit. I kinda like it I guess i'll explain later.
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09-17-2004, 03:45 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Carribean
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Originally Posted by thamior
this is very strange i must admit. I kinda like it I guess i'll explain later.
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ITs like an inbreed of slang and normal lyricism style, i felt like an idiot saying
"wassa" after 3 no slang lines ><
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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09-20-2004, 05:59 PM
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It's not supposed to be "wassa"...just a typo on my part.
As for genre, well, I don't exactly fix my writing into genres and categories and fortes. I suppose the closest it would come to would be romance, although it just seems so far from it...
-sighs- The more an more I read it the more and more I abhor it.
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