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Old 09-14-2004, 09:16 AM   #1
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song o.o

Intro
You thought you loved her
But you don’t
Now your fucked bad
And I won’t
Be your friend anymore
Asshole get away on the floor
Your no better than everyone else to me
Your everything i hate in me

Verse 1
How dare you try to take
What wasn’t yours first place
Now you dare become
Everything I hated in some
Your not better no to me
Your another idiot
Your just what I told you to see
And you told me you wouldn’t be

Bridge
I hate you now, your no one i know
The anger boils, You better go

Chorus
GET OUT OF My FACE
Before its too late
I FEEL IT COMING ON NOW
Im in that state
GET READY FOR THE SHOWDOWN
You know that’s its coming
GET READY FOR THE BaTTLE
Cuz im just dying
To Get It Started
V2
Its getting hotter every moment
Its getting harder to control it
Its taking over me now
Its coming you me know
You cant escape from it
Because it will kill you bit by bit
Feel the pressure feel the tenstion
I wont have this desception

Chorus Repeat-

End
I HATE YOU SO MUCH
I WISH I COULD TELL YOU
I HATE YOU SO MUCH
JUST DIE AND ROT TOO
I HATE YOU SO MUCH
YOU CAN GO TO HELL
I HATE YOU SO MUCH

Chorus repeat.




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Old 09-15-2004, 04:14 AM   #2
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well the form of the songs igood mytery but the content is alright except for the end where it kinda falls apart but each to his own. For the most part its a good song, at least your expressing your emotions.
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