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Old 09-10-2004, 11:26 PM   #1
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I've been walking on the sun

Life is like a dream way
Running from the bullets
Life sends on its way,
Call for help, but people don't do a fucking thing,
IT disgusts me now,
But I guess I keep trying

If it’s simply
Then I guess I stand corrected
If it’s not that hard
Then I guess I stand misdirected
And yet I stand here still?
Can you see the fire in my eyes?
Cuz I've been walking on the sun,
Ohhh Yes, I go walking on the sun
Ohhh Yes, I go walking on the sun


Should I run away?
Even though I'll never be away,
If I disappear
Will I have truly gotten away?
Every morning all I want is five more minutes
Am I really dead or am I still striving?

Though they hear me,
I don't think they take in anything
And I then think, how complicating,
Forgive me, I'm getting frustrated,
Can you see the fire in my eyes?
Cuz I've been walking on the sun,
Ohhh Yes, I go walking on the sun
Ohhh Yes, I go walking on the sun

Should I run away?
Even though I'll never be away,
If I disappear
Will I have truly gotten away?
Every morning all I want is five more minutes
Am I really dead or am I still striving?

Though they hear me,
I don't think they take in anything
And I then think, how complicating,
Forgive me, I'm getting frustrated,
Can you see the fire in my eyes?
Cuz I've been walking on the sun,
Yes, I go walking on the sun
Yes, I go walking on the sun

Life is like a dream way
Running from the bullets
Life sends on its way,
Call for help, but people don't do a fucking thing,
IT disgusts me now,
But I guess I keep trying
If it’s simply
Then I guess I stand corrected
If it’s not that hard
Then I guess I stand misdirected
And yet I stand here still?
Can you see the fire in my eyes?
Cuz I've been walking on the sun,
Yes, I go walking on the sun
YES, I GO WALKING ON THE SUN!
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Old 09-13-2004, 04:05 AM   #2
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Nice write mate, looks like rap..
Wouldn't mind hearing it with music..
All in all cool lyrics..
All the best.........Mouse..
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Old 09-15-2004, 01:50 AM   #3
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thanks, I was just getting frustrated with things and i thought, Lifes kinda like walking on the sun, you know? metophoricly speaking of coarse.
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Old 09-16-2004, 06:50 AM   #4
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Cool...
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Old 09-16-2004, 09:49 AM   #5
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Very nice rhythem to the whole thing. Also I agree, it would be great to hear it to a beat to get the full effect of it. Good stuff.
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