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Old 09-07-2004, 11:22 AM   #1
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song - "Quell the Storm"

Before you think im on crack, this is a rewrite (if u liked it you may still think im on crack) with th same title obviously you can find the original http://www.writingforums.com/viewtopic.php?t=5078.

(it has a guitar part but im not gonna post it right now)

What are these thought that roam my mind?
My thoughts that start chaos inside.
And off my mind goes like a storm.
I dont wanna think anymore.
Quell the storm...

It hurts to have these thoughts of shame.
IT hurts to feel and know i'm lame.
Because inside I know im not.
But, for to show, what have I got?

Chrous:
Quell my misery
Quell all inside me.
End the storm of my thoughts
End the "I am nots"
All the doubts.
Depression bouts.
Quell it all.
Quell the storm.

The pain Rolls in so easily.
Seconds feel an eternity.
I wallow in depression, despair.
not going to go anywhere.
Quell the storm..

*repeat chorus*

Spasm of anger, Spasm of pain.
Quell th anger, Quell the pain.
Quell it all.
Quell the storm... x2
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Old 09-13-2004, 04:17 AM   #2
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Not bad mate, not one of your better writes.
But! it's all good...
Thanks for the read....Mouse..
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Old 09-13-2004, 04:41 AM   #3
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thanks, which quell the storm did you like better?
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Old 09-16-2004, 06:56 AM   #4
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The first..Mind you, reading through this again..
I like both...
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Old 09-16-2004, 06:59 AM   #5
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thank you, i hope to post the rest of my songs later on i hope you guys enjoy them all.
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Old 09-16-2004, 09:48 AM   #6
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Pretty good! At the end, I was kinda left wanting a 'bit more to it, other than that I loved it.
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