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Old 09-07-2004, 05:55 AM   #1
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Song - Another step

ok well i though i had to go to school but it looks like I dont so i'll post a song, i dont know if all my songs should be in one post or if i should post them seperately because there are quite a few.

Well about the song, this song is done entirerly it has a guitar part and everything. it is my favorite new song and i hope you like it.

What is this I feel?
Something I dont understand.
A feeling unknown to me.
I'm lost in this world, don't know where to go.
I'm tryin' to find who I am.

Chorus:
But despite my failings
I'll find out one day.
I know i'll find myself
If I have to forge my way.

I'll continue to ramble on.
Another step, and i'm gone.

Who is it that I am?
What is it that I want to be?
This is much too difficult.
Its so hard to find me.

*Repeat Chorus*

I'll wander the desert of my mind.
Only Myself, to find.

Do I dare to look at my life.
To look at what is the past.
Uncover old, hard moments.
All from the happy to the sad.

*Repeat Chorus*

There's a spirit that fills my soul.
It covers whats empty, makes me whole.

I guess i'll find out one day.
But for now i must push on
I know i'll find out who i am.
Another step, and i'm gone.

Guitar part:

Verse:
A minor
C major
G

(play this by strumming each chord four times for each line)

Bridge:
A minor
C major

(pick each note)

(stop on the comma in each bridge but the l;ast and hold out for two beats)

Chorus:
F
G
C

(play the same as the verse struming each four times)

(additionally play at least one line of whatever you are playin gbefore you sing and then stop the guitar and then head into the lyrics)
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Old 09-13-2004, 04:20 AM   #2
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I liked these lyrics..Kinda flows in a storyline
of You can run from unattached things, you can't run away from y'all self..
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Old 09-13-2004, 04:40 AM   #3
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thanks, i thought no one would reveiw my stuff.
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