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Old 08-23-2004, 08:46 PM   #1
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Understand
Understand

[Verse 1]
They sit there laughing at me
And still this pain inside, you can't see
Cry and sing, is this all life can be
Please take me through the rain
and let me live again

[Chorus]
Please hold on
I hold on to you
Please go on
I'm going through,
some things you don't understand

[Verse 2]
I sit here writing away
They have no idea why I am this way
Love and live, I hope you stay
Help me not to sulk my own lie
And pray that once again, I'll try
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Old 08-30-2004, 07:40 AM   #2
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I really like this. It's a very concise little song, but that's not a bad thing. Short and sweet. It also seems very personal, and quite well expressed.
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