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Old 08-07-2004, 08:34 PM   #1
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With the Sunrise

Pretty sad song I started back at a time in my life when I was pretty sad. I guess I didn't stay sad long enough to finish it, which isn't really a bad thing.

Here it is:

It's been so long since you've been gone, but here you are again,
looking at me sweetly, asking how I've been.
You say this time has changed your mind about the way you feel,
oh how I've longed to hear those words, if only they were real...

With the sunrise I realize this all pretend,
I'll wake up to find that you're still gone again.
As the darkness parts the new days starts, while dreams come to an end,
and the truth shines in my eyes, with the sunrise.
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Old 08-17-2004, 04:18 AM   #2
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Wow!! what a very nice lyric. Just those lines
tell a story of hope. To find that it was only a dream.

Thanks for the read..

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