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Old 08-07-2004, 04:20 PM   #1
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"Missin' You"

"Missin' You"

Oh, I'm missin' you
I can't stop thinkin about you
I just keep on wishin' you were here

I want to be kissin' you
And holdin' you so tightly
'Cause to me you are so dear

We're 3,000 miles apart, baby
And oh, that makes me so sad

Chorus:
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Are you thinkin' about me?
When I'm there do I make ya happy?
Are you missin' me as much as I miss you?
I can't take this pain much longer
It won't make me any stronger
I'm so lonely sittin' here without you
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Maybe someday, baby
We can be together
Then this pain will just dissappear

'Cause my heart is breakin'
Inside I'm achin'
Does your heart feel like it's tearin' up inside?

So many miles between us
Doesn't that just make you so sad?

Chorus:
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Are you thinkin' about me?
When I'm there do I make ya happy?
Are you missin' me as much as I miss you?
I can't take this pain much longer
It won't make me any stronger
I'm so lonely sittin' here without you
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You're always on my mind
I wish you were here by my side
Oh, I cannot stop these tears from streamin' down

I'll never forget you
And please don't forget me
I know were gonna make it somehow

All the miles that separate
Just bring tears to my eyes

Chorus: (2 times)
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Are you thinkin' about me?
When I'm there do I make ya happy?
Are you missin' me as much as I miss you?
I can't take this pain much longer
It won't make me any stronger
I'm so lonely sittin' here without you
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Without you
Oh, yeah

I'm givin you my heart
Won't you take a chance, baby and give your heart to me?
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Old 08-07-2004, 06:13 PM   #2
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I Can't get a good feel for how this would sound...is there any way you could describe it?
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Old 08-08-2004, 09:42 PM   #3
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No, not really.
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Old 08-09-2004, 09:13 PM   #4
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No, not really.
Have you done any music for it at all? If you have, perhaps you could tell us if it's fast or slow. Do you write music for the words you write?


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Old 08-10-2004, 06:44 AM   #5
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I have to admit its a very interesting song, prhaps because its so close to something im experiencing. You rhyme in some parts and dont in others however I feel that you may be able to get something out of it.
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Old 08-10-2004, 03:55 PM   #6
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The chorus of this song is fast, but the rest of it is kind of slow.
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