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Old 08-04-2004, 08:21 AM   #1
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Dreamland Troubadour - comments appreciated

This is the first time I've written lyrics for a specific melody, rather than the words coming first with no particular tune in mind.

Like to know what you think

Dreamland Troubadour

Way after midnight
When I am sleeping
I’ll always find him there
Lit by the moonlight
That’s shining on his hair
Soft chords from his guitar
Drift through the starry air

And he takes me through secret doors
He’s my dreamland troubadour

Way after midnight
When I am dreaming
He’ll always sing for me
Tempo of twilight
Playing slow in minor key
His smile always lets me know
His songs are only for me

Chorus

He is my reason for living
He is my dreamland troubadour
And when the cares of the day won’t go away
I know who I am waiting for

After midnight
I know I’ll find him
Humming a melody
Eyes bright as firelight
Gazing at me tenderly
He brings me a gift of love
Wrapped up in rhapsody

And I’m not alone any more
With my dreamland troubadour

Way after midnight
I‘ll find him singing
A soulful serenade
Sprinkling of starlight
Brightens our forever glade
His eyes are telling me
Our dream will never fade

Chorus

He brings a light to my darkness
He is my dreamland troubadour
When he’s around me I know that I’ve found
A love I’ve never known before

Way after midnight
When I am dreaming
I know that I’m secure
Within his love-light
No daylight can obscure
He is my shining knight
He makes my heart sing
Dreamweaver of delight
But then come the morning
I wake up aching for
My dreamland troubadour

Copyright © August 2004 by D Rulliere
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Old 08-05-2004, 04:54 AM   #2
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Nice write Bee..


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