thamior

Yet another song, this one is very rough when I try to sing iut and some of the rhymes could be better so i'm very open to suggestion.

Never had many friends.....
Never was in a clique......
Never even wanted to be......

I never thought i'd ever have a true friend.
Never thought someone would even offer a hand.
I didnt think anyone would talk to me.
Or their eyes see what my eyes see.

I never saw the hands reaching out in friendship.
I always thought that alone i'd face my hardship.
I never understodd how to find a friend....
I never really could have taken that hand....

Chorus:
I ask you, what is a friend?
Someone woh'll help you without a demand.
Someone with whom your secrets you can confide.
Somone who you know will be by your side.
Who'll offer a hand even in darkest off banes [ <- fade the 's' sound]
And soemone for whom you know you would do the same...

But is that a friend?

Wont a friend tell not what you wnat but what is true.
Isnt a friend willing to step in the same shoe.
What if they never look you in the eye.
And tell you whats really on their mind.

[repeat chorus]

but how long is a friend?

Friends will last a lifetime.... [ <- fade 'm' sound]
Despite distance or fights along the line.... [ <- fade 'n' sound]
Because even in 'bouts of no communication.
A friend will be a friend 'till yours or their end.

Because if they never wanted to talk to you again.
Then despite what you had they were never a friend.
Friends resolve troubles and hardships someday.
Because if they never do they were never friends in any way.

[repeat chorus]

So ask yourself.....Are you a friend?

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Shy_Love

Awesome job! The lryics are great! The only place I had a problem was uh...hold on.... here

"I never saw the hands reaching out in friendship.
I always thought that alone i'd face my hardship.
I never understodd how to find a friend....
I never really could have taken that hand...."

When I was singing it ( which I might have een doing wrong...I'm not sure how the beat goes with this ) but I seem like I was tring to fit in more words then it could handle. Maybe thats just becasue I don't know how the beat goes...what type of song it is and all that. Hehe....maybe I should shut up! It is awesome though!

Mystery

Thats why
1)No one can copy ame lee's songs
2)you can base vocals of hers.

And you've never heard llinking park, jay-z, ludacris, usher, rasmus, da vintchi's notepad or eminem have you?
Listen to them and see how they do it.

Good lyrics btw, but its more gramatically correct to use , than ......
Just some writing experience.

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Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...

Yes, must still shut up.

thamior

Ok, um just have to find those parts...

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