Too long without a tune, now i bring 3 new just for you - Writers Forum

Mystery · 07-27-2004, 11:50 PM

After some time.

Shy Love

V1
A cherry blossom
Or an oak tree
she is such a mystery
to me
you see
to breath you gotta
Be out open
for your part you've spoke
My turn

Chorush

Don't worry
Wrong way for the right way out
I'm not sorry
I'm still you, i can only give out
Shy love

V2
The wolf turns
So vaguely clear
The varnish on your skin so clear
16 years
Burdens and fears
to wind up here
Everything so clearly unclear
your turn

End Bridge

I took all i wanted
Ate my full
I tracked what i hunted
Now it's all for you

Chorus Repeat.

Guess who i wrote this for. Dont get the wrong impression, i just liked the title and general idea when it came to me :>

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After writers block >_>
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Brief selection

V1
My pen hits the light
On stage
No time for stage fright
Polish it up with varsich
Wreak Carnage
No time for lunch no more

Bridge
Time n' action
Just dont fit
I cant accept the reflection
n' vice versa
I cant reject the affection

Chorus

Live in the fast lane
live the consiquence
Live the life in vain
No defection
Without your time life's just a brief selection

V2

One night stand, at hand
with you
No time to love you
Wash you face with soap
Wash off the hope
No time for love no more

endbridge

Destined to be alone
I took the path of fame
No time in exchange to be in the zone
Things keep flowing all the same

Endshorus

I want time to love
I want time to live
I need time to take time out
To remember whats it's all about
Stray the path with no intention
I hate the style of this brief selection

*music stops*
The distance from the lack of time between us has grown so much colder
if need be to make time ill carry the world on my shoulders.
*Guitar solo rises and fades within 30 seconds*

This is what im scared will happen if i do become famous, i dont want to be one of those people who have so few selections because they have such little time.

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This was inspired by my EX, who risked it with me and for fucked
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V1
Just another line
To trip over
Just more time
to hate over
If i take the risks
Will it make me better?
If i crawl on my fists
Will it make me look clever?

Bridge

Risk Risk Risk
Pain Pain
Remorse

Chorus

You stupid fool
Whats living on the line worth
Lifes a game not a gamble
IT doesnt help you at all

V2
Just another borderline
To jump over
Just more spare time
To love over
IF i consider the risks
Will it make me better?
IF i get up off my fists
Will it make me look clever?

Bridge

Risk Risk Risk
Pain Pain
Remorse

Chorus
*repeat*

hope you like the style, this is about the people who live on the line, and the people who like 10 km off the line. I live inbetween, my g/f took it to the line, and taught me to step off it. She contributed one good thing to me.

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And from another burst of emotions
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3 minute hate(btw i need two more people for this song)

*mystery singing*

I liked the way you talked
I liked the way you walked
You had
style
beuty
grace
elegance
brilliance
But now?

*music intensifies and drops again*

*Shy Love*(picking names :>)

I wanted to do what you did
I wanted all you had, every hit
you had
a family
a rep
a fame and fortune
friends
a girlfriend(or boy in this case)
But now?

*music intensifies and drops again*

*Penny*(again picking names)

I zealed who you were, i hated me
I zealed your lovely personality
you were
giving
optimistic
cool
chillin
loving
but now?

*music goes harder and drums stop keeping beat, switches to tencho piano and japanese fluit, all three sing with more alternative style music*

chorus

In the end your act fell apart
You tricked me but i saw what you were at heart
Fuck you for all you put me through
Fuck you for what you used me to do
Fuck you for how you left me in state
3 minutes hate....

*music gets even louder and i sing the chorus solo screaming LP style*

Escuse the harsh languadge, it gives it a more harder hit to people who are like this. I hope you liked it.

Coming up: Shallow n' loving it
doorstep mat
Too deep to keep my neck up

Enjoy comment and be ready for my new songs(1-2 weeks till i do them, need more inspiration)

-Mystery

Shy_Love · 07-28-2004, 01:08 PM

Sometimes the "harsh" words are needing. I have a few songs with a few....harsh words in them. Sometimes those words just discribe things better. Awesome job with the songs. ( oOo...before I forget...I'm going to email you a song I'm trying to write but having problems with...if thats ok? ) ...anyway...uh..I forget what I was going to say now.....crap....(thats not what I was going to say...) Ah! I don't see any problems with any of them! When I try to sing them its a tad hard because I really don;t know how the beat goes...( like I'm sure I'v said before...) but awesome job and keep writing!

Mystery · 07-29-2004, 01:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shy_Love

Sometimes the "harsh" words are needing. I have a few songs with a few....harsh words in them. Sometimes those words just discribe things better. Awesome job with the songs. ( oOo...before I forget...I'm going to email you a song I'm trying to write but having problems with...if thats ok? ) ...anyway...uh..I forget what I was going to say now.....crap....(thats not what I was going to say...) Ah! I don't see any problems with any of them! When I try to sing them its a tad hard because I really don;t know how the beat goes...( like I'm sure I'v said before...) but awesome job and keep writing!

Their half acappela

And you killed me (by falling of my chair and landing on my back, dammit if i had laned on my head i would be alive) with the crap,(that wasnt what i was going to say) comment :>

I just loved that comment ^^
And you can e-mail me anyday, i get flooded by 140 e-mauls a day....most are porn advertisments. the reason why I want a server e-mail >_>

Thx for the comments, gonna check my e-mail now.

Shy_Love · 07-29-2004, 08:03 AM

Sorry....I type what I'm thinking so thats were that came from..I'm sorry you died....sorta.. **sits confused** You should get an email filter or whatever..I don't get bad emails due to some kinda cleaner upper thingy. Wait! Don't check your email yet..I didn't send the eamil!!! ( I had to go to the bathroom really bad last night and then my mom wanted me to go to bed to I didn't get to get back on the computer to send the email....not that you reallywanted to hear that story but like I said before....I type what I'm thinking.

)

Oh....your welcome..

Mystery · 07-29-2004, 09:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shy_Love

Sorry....I type what I'm thinking so thats were that came from..I'm sorry you died....sorta.. **sits confused** You should get an email filter or whatever..I don't get bad emails due to some kinda cleaner upper thingy. Wait! Don't check your email yet..I didn't send the eamil!!! ( I had to go to the bathroom really bad last night and then my mom wanted me to go to bed to I didn't get to get back on the computer to send the email....not that you reallywanted to hear that story but like I said before....I type what I'm thinking.

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Oh....your welcome..

I really didnt need to hear that...you put rude images in my head

And i meant you made me laught :>

Shy_Love · 07-29-2004, 09:57 AM

Sorry.....

Shy_Love · 07-29-2004, 10:00 AM

I sent it now... **smiles big**

Mystery · 07-29-2004, 11:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shy_Love

I sent it now... **smiles big**

*claps* i m so pwoud of joo

Shy_Love · 07-30-2004, 08:16 AM

Thank you!