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Old 07-27-2004, 07:31 AM   #1
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The Broken Window......

I couldnt really think of a title if you can think of a better one tell me. This song is about that same girl but it questions how I know my feelings for her without ever having met her and questions on who she wants as another guy likes her.... .

How do I know you're real?
How can it be truth when I cannot feel.
So much trust i 've had to put into you.
And you could break the window on cue.

How do I know it wont be him over me?
Leaving me in the dark depression of uncertainty.
How do I know that it wont soon all be gone?
The trust I have in you, have I been wrong.......

Chorus:
How do I know what you feel for me?
I have to put my faith in uncertainty.
To make my trust as hard as steel.
In something that hasnt proven just as real.
I feel your slipping and I don't want to lose you at all.
I must not let my strength and faith waver and fall.
But for the moment I hope that its true.
But I don't know God's plans for me and for you.....

[guitar solo]

I ask these questions to anyone who'd listen.
How do I know if she loves me, is something missin' ?
I feel ashes will rain from the sky.
Before its answered as to why.

It pains my mind with this to wonder.
It screams to all for some kind of answer.
But I know that it will not come.
And my searching is not done.....

[Repeat Chorus]

[Guitar solo]

Can anyone answer at all?
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Old 07-27-2004, 11:36 AM   #2
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I like this alot... and I could answer this but I don't know where you stand with some things..I'll tell you what I would do....
..I would pray...pray that if what me and that person have isn't meant to be that God would shut doors and not let things get to far....if things already have getten far then I would still pray and talk to that person....It seems like your almost asking what is love? If she's basing love on a feeling...then its not love...love isn't a feeling. A feeling comes along iwht it but its a comitment. The person has to say " I'm going to love and stay wioth this person no matter what!" See...if love is based on a feeling then it will come and go.... Like all feelsing do...Your happy...your sad...one thing everything "feels" fine and the next it dosn't...So you would spend the rest of your life falling in and out of love. You and that person have to choise to love each other.....man its hard to explain...I may even be off subject right now..I'm rambling so I'll shut up...
I do like this song though....GOod job wrinting!
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Old 07-27-2004, 12:21 PM   #3
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thanks, and you hit it right on the spot it is about love.
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