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Old 07-22-2004, 01:23 AM   #1
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adrowning feeling of love or friendship

Inverted thrust
upon this
world!

you couldn't look behind[x2]

run away
from the killer
in your face

don't you forget
to take his
place

lying wasted
in this
puddle

my lost ambition
my hopes and dreams

float away...

will they find me
in the fountain
where i lost
my innocence

spent a lifetime
under water
just to find
you

though we can
never tie
together do
to this inate
dependentship

I'll spend my life arrested
i'll spend my life...

will they find us
in the fountain
where we lost
our innocence

submerged in heaven
deathstroke eleven
we'll find some way to
quit

we'll find a way....

and...will they find us...?
will...will they find us?
will they?

ok so, i wrote this the other day after i got in a arguement with someone, so tell me what you think
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Old 07-22-2004, 04:57 AM   #2
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Cool, a bit more thought and it will be a
very good lyric.
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