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Old 07-20-2004, 10:50 AM   #1
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dreaming's just a state of mind....

Dreaming’s Just a State of Mind

Verse 1

Why is night-time thinking so intense?
How does the dark turn madness into sense?
What magic moves within the midnight mind
Unlocking long forgotten doors
Revealing visions undefined
Defying daylight laws?

Chorus

Dreaming’s just a state of mind
And you don’t have to be asleep
Just kick the real right out the door
It’s illusions that you keep

Verse 2

The sunshine darkens every deepest dream
And the light’s too loud to hear the stream
Of consciousness that’s sleeping in your mind
Tangled tunes and mangled rhymes
Unravel, replay then rewind
You forget how many times

Verse 3

But when the darkness falls you come alive
Allowing free expression to arrive
Sweet sensuous music of the slumbering soul
Your inspiration waits to wake
The night will make your half-life whole
Transcending truth and fake

Bridge

Daylight, sunlight, twilight, dusk
Doesn’t really matter much
It’s weaving dreams inside your heart
It’s taking tired old trains of thought apart
It’s looking at the same old payload from a different view
It’s changing washed-out words for something new

Chorus

Believing’s just a state of mind
Like knowing that the moon is blue
And if you’re sure the song is right
You will make it sing for you


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Old 07-20-2004, 11:46 AM   #2
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I like it alot but I kind of hoped for a deeper underlying meaning, thats not what has to be so don't go changing it just saying a comment but it was really cool.
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