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Old 07-19-2004, 04:28 AM   #1
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Open your mind.

Open your mind

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Verse1
She always wondered
What her life,
would be like on the other side,
Thoughts kept dragging her under,
I say! find the key,
Open your mind,

Verse2
She kept believing,
Everything she tried to do
was impossible,
Kept telling her she was unstoppable,
Find the key,
Open your mind,

Pre chorus
She climbed and climbed everyday,
Searched through the wind and rain,

Chorus
She climbed to the top of her life,
Things looked the same on the other side,
Followed the river of thinking,
To the fountain of knowledge,
Begged for the key,
To open her mind,

Verse3
She always wondered,
Through books,
That never really satisfied
Her zest for hunger,
Find the key,
Open your mind,

Verse4
She couldn't see it,
The answer's right there
in front of her,
She's gotta believe it,
Find the key,
Open your mind,

Pre chorus
She climbed and climbed everyday,
Searched through the wind and rain,

Chorus
She climbed to the top of her life,
Things looked the same on the other side,
Followed the river of thinking,
To the fountain of knowledge,
Begged for the key,
To open her mind,

Bridge
Carry on, Keep going,
Create inside a sense of knowing,
To be what you want to be,
Living life honestly,
Confidence is a natural thing,
That you will find,
You will find,
Inside, yourself,

Chorus
She climbed to the top of her life,
Things looked the same on the other side,
Followed the river of thinking,
To the fountain of knowledge,
Begged for the key,
To open her mind,
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Old 07-19-2004, 07:33 AM   #2
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Great Lyrics Mouse. Please let me know when you put it to music, I want to hear it. It is about time you posted something. This is good, real good, does this mean you are back????

Keep it up. Miss you my friend,

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Old 07-19-2004, 07:49 AM   #3
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I cant find the rhyme, exect the it that rhymes in the last verse...
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Ooh, nice. I really love the idea in this song. *nods*

And Mystery, why should it rhyme? Songs don't need to rhyme to be good. (Rhyming is quite often waaaay overrated. I think as long as it flows, it's all good.)

I'd love to hear it as a song... you ever planning to record? ^.^
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Thanks guys I really appreciate y'all
feed back. I'm busy at the mo'.
I'll pop in later.
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Ooh, nice. I really love the idea in this song. *nods*

And Mystery, why should it rhyme? Songs don't need to rhyme to be good. (Rhyming is quite often waaaay overrated. I think as long as it flows, it's all good.)

I'd love to hear it as a song... you ever planning to record? ^.^
Thankyou Destiny.
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