I'm sorry - Writers Forum

Martin · 07-13-2004, 07:14 AM

(girl sings)
I'm sorry things worked out like they did
I'm sorry but that's all I can give
I know you hoped for more
but you know I'm spoken for
so I'm sorry

(Boy sings)
I'm sorry. I think I got really close
I'm sorry I did not have a go
I told you how I felt
you said "bye bye and farewell"

so I'm sorry you bitched up like you did
you tricked me and toyed around with my head
We played the same game
but you played it just for fun
You're already getting your spanking done
so I'm sorry

thamior · 07-13-2004, 07:59 AM

seems kinda short, is it rap btw?

Martin · 07-13-2004, 12:20 PM

Nah. It's a one minute punksong. Simple and catchy.

thamior · 07-13-2004, 03:10 PM

ok, thats cool

Mystery · 07-14-2004, 05:24 AM

I see so many of these songs nowdays where the guy hates the Girl for what she did...supposedly "played with me" thing...i've been through it 3 times and I only recently realised that only 1 was actually playing me.

A girl will never "play with you" unless you force her too....

I wrote one like this, but she actually told me what she was doing

Martin · 07-14-2004, 06:27 AM

hmm... we had a thing going for 2 weeks. I slept over at her place a couple of times and I felt we might were going somewhere. Then she tells me she has a boyfriend but he's not in the country for a while and that she wants to wait for him.
Of course she never meant to hurt me, but she did and she wasn't honest with me to start from. So I'm sorry, but she can go to hell.

Mystery · 07-14-2004, 11:02 AM

In that case i agree...