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Old 06-22-2004, 04:45 PM   #1
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Fade to blue... Any comments welcome

I know it's pretty simplistic, but - so was "Yesterday"!? - er - not that I'm comparing myself to sir Paul!

fade to blue....

do you remember
leaping off the stage
to dance with me?

we were so recklessly
so radiantly
so hopefully
in love
back then

but now it breaks my heart to know
that you will never dance with me again

can't keep the beat
with lonely feet

the melody is incomplete

without you
everything I do
fades to blue...


our bright september
changing like the year
to sombre skies

we loved too foolishly
too fleetingly
too hopelessly
too brief
a time

it's tearing me apart to know
our steps once so in tune no longer rhyme

we pass our days
in separate ways

our memories a misty haze

without you
every summer's day
turns to grey...


this morning I awoke to see
flowers scattered on the bed
petals strewn around my head
and I felt you there beside me

I turned to take you in my arms
and found a cold and empty space
I'd longed so much to touch you face

but cruel reality
had played a joke on me

it was just a dream
just a dream
a dream of you
a dream in blue....


do you remember
softly singing songs
of love for me?

we were so heedlessly
so blissfully
so ignorantly
in love
back then

but now it breaks my heart in two
to know you'll never sing those songs again

can't let you go
I miss you so

and the future that we'll never know

without you
seems like all I do
fades to blue...
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Old 06-24-2004, 04:29 PM   #2
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Excellent lyrics. I liked the rhyme, story line,
how everything came together of how this
person felt inside.
The lyric just flowed nicely.
You never went of course.....Nice.

It's all good.....Mouse..
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Old 07-12-2004, 10:33 AM   #3
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Thanks for the encouragement Mouse!
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Old 07-20-2004, 12:23 AM   #4
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nice! Simple -clean-says what has to be said.Please stay at this you are good at it.
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Old 07-20-2004, 10:44 AM   #5
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Thank you Penny!

I'll stick at it!!
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