Hello everyone, this is my first post!
This is a song i wrote. I'm going to record it to acoustic guitar. The vocals sound a lot like If Winter Ends by Bright Eyes. If you've never heard that song check it out, i'm sure everyone here would love it.
The stars shine like lightening
why dont you hurry inside before the storm comes?
But its too late i call to them, it's too late
I'm going to drown out here in the rain
because emotions are so pretty
and Misery is one of them
she's so pretty sweet Misery, my love
On the beach the rain
it sounds so loud
i cant help but wonder what i'm thinking
standing on the shore like a shadow
i've forgotten
Well, that's it so far. The entire thing is just repeated twice. I know the rhyme scheme and meter is nonexistant but with the guitar it sounds fine. i just drag out words and hold vowels.
