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Foolish girl...Re-write.. Please critique
Just trying to re-write these lyrics. I'm always changing
songs. Please critique.. I'm never satisfied.
(C) Realmouse2003
Foolish girl..
Verse1..
Words carried
gently on the wind
Whispers of a dreamer
Waiting on a dream
Cloud nine
Where she spends her time
Searching for a fairytale
Deep inside her mind
Chorus
Foolish Girl
Living in a fantasy
Golden diamond jewellery
A crystal palace for all to see
Foolish girl
Doesn't like reality
She lives in her dream
World of make believe
Verse2...
Patiently she waits
For her brave knight
To come slay reality
The dragon in her life
She can't escape
To where she wants to go
Life keeps her prisoner
inside her withering soul
Chorus..
Foolish Girl
Living in a fantasy
Golden diamond jewellery
A crystal palace for all to see
Foolish girl
Doesn't like reality
She lives in a dream
World of make believe
Bridge..
As time flies
She awaits her brave knight
Come rescue her
Take her in your arms
Years go by
Tired of waiting patiently
My knight she cries
I'll see you in the sky
Brave knight she cries
I'll see you in the sky
Verse 3...
Sad to say
No one ever knew her
When she passed away
No one really cared
The only person there
Was a priest to give a prayer
For a lonely dreamer
Forever rest in peace
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It"s just a phase 
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