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Old 04-23-2004, 03:33 AM   #1
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song - So alone

So alone

V1
She has feelings of abandonment
To which she clings
Like a faded worn security blanket
She enjoys the pain it brings

V2
She thinks she knows him well
But she’s never seen his face
He came into her lazy life
And set a faster pace

Pre-chorus
She never could admit to him
She could never tell
He’s only just come into her life
And now he’s gone as well

Chorus
He’s gone, she’s so alone – oh oh so alone
He’s gone, she’s on her own – so alone
He’s gone, she’s so alone
There’s nothing she can do
She’s blue, and he’s gone

V3
She’s not known him for very long
But she’s certain she wants more
He has filled her head
With words she’s not heard before

V4
She’s missing him so badly
Life grows excessively dim
She’s missed the opportunity to say
That she’s in love with him

Chorus
He’s gone, she’s so alone – oh oh so alone
He’s gone, she’s on her own – so alone
He’s gone, she’s so alone
There’s nothing she can do
She’s blue, and he’s gone




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Old 04-23-2004, 08:00 AM   #2
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Hi Hollyoake. Are you a musician? I really like the chorus of this song because I can really feel how it would probably go if I heard it. Usually, I have a problem reading musical lyrics, even when I know the song, because I get tripped up on how it should go...you know? But, this song, at least the chorus anyway, transcends that problem.
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Old 04-23-2004, 10:39 AM   #3
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I love this song Hollyoake, you are a talented
writer. what makes you so talented is that,
you wrote this song today. Amazing....
Pulled it straight out of thin air. I could never
do that..You have a gift. Please use it...

You are Hollyoake the magician...
I Really enjoyed reading this lyric
10 out of 10..

Best wishes....Mouse..[ Big hug smilie]
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Old 04-24-2004, 11:45 AM   #4
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Very good. I enjoyed it. Thanks.
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Old 04-24-2004, 06:56 PM   #5
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I enjoyed you enjoying it too Kat..hehehehehe
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Old 04-26-2004, 04:06 AM   #6
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thanks, i'm not a musician, i can't even play a cowbell! and i know exactly what you mean when you sat that you cannot read it well because you are not sure how it is to be sung, I don't even know how it is to be sung... but i am working on it!

thank you Kat, i am thoroughly estatic that you enjoyed it.

mouse, i'm very happy that you enjoyed others enjoying my work! you and i could make a great team you know!
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Hollyoake wrote:: mouse, i'm very happy that you enjoyed others enjoying my work! you and i could make a great team you know!
I don't know? A bag gurl and a honest gentleman.
Hmmmmmm that's a tough decision to make.. I'm too honest for you..
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Old 04-26-2004, 07:17 AM   #8
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i'm a good girl now! just ask my mother...er, on second thoughts, don't bother!
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Old 04-26-2004, 07:40 AM   #9
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I was just joking..
I'd love to..
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book me an appointment then, and i'll see you next week!
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Where????????
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Old 04-26-2004, 08:04 AM   #12
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you decide, you're the up and coming musican! click your fingers and i shall come!
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Mouse clicks fingers,Huh! no snow white.

Take care...Mouse..
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have you looked everywhere?
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Oh gosh, this is so good! Wow, you have music for it? You should releaze this one, I'd definetly buy it hehe! REALLY GOOD!! You're really talented!

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