Thread: I Miss You

(Chorus)
I miss you, I do (x4)

Months ago staring down the sun
Just the two of us having fun
Who'd have known this loaded gun
Could trigger my longest run

We won't slide, we won't fall
You are mine to love and call
Whenever you're hurt, whenever you're down
Come to me I'm always around

I miss you, I do (x4)

It's a really good start but in my opinion should be a little longer.

It's a little short and keep in mind that the lyrics don't always have to rhyme. It sounds like you're rhyming for the sake of rhyming, and it makes it sound a little cliche. Besides that, it was good.