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    Montage of Life: For female vocalists

    Momma struggled to give me a breath,
    held me closely to her life-giving breasts,
    She said Daddy knows your little soul,
    But he is gone, heaven bound.
    He lost himself for you,
    so that you could be forever found.
    Infants can imagine,
    They can see the face of paradise.
    A montage of life.


    Chorus: Growing older my precious child,
    Now I'm a soldier, for the army of trials,
    Seek for the wisdom, seek for grace,
    Cause you'll never be forgotten in that sacred place.
    A montage of life.


    Now I'm twenty two and a boy he comes for me,
    Tells me he loves me, forever we'll be.
    My own connection, and momma she cries,
    cause three years later it's my turn to rise!
    A child of my own flesh and bones,
    She is a jewel a gem, one of a kind!
    Infants can imagine,
    They can see the face of paradise.
    A montage of life.


    Now I'm eighty and dying real fast,
    but there's a lady who I gave a name,
    My little daughter she's middle aged,
    gave me a blessing, in my ancient page.
    Little one, little feet, run into my arms,
    and gently she weeps, Grandma I'm scared
    of the dark.
    Infants can imagine,
    They can see the face of paradise.
    A montage of life.
    Chorus: Repeat as desired fade out.
    "Never settle for mediocrity or the status quo. Strive for excellence in everything you do."
    Dad.​ http:www.feonjonius.info

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    The best part is the chorus. The verses, especially the first, need a little work. But overall very good.

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    Yea, I agree, the chorus is awesome. I am curious how "A montage of life" is going to be melodically, but good overall.

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    Thank you I'm most grateful.
    "Never settle for mediocrity or the status quo. Strive for excellence in everything you do."
    Dad.​ http:www.feonjonius.info

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    like everybody else it seems, i think the chorus was brillient.

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    Agree, chorus is fab

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