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    Sailing Lad (Foolhardy)

    On a day as bright and clear as glass,
    A fool of a lad sat on the grass
    About to become a man at last
    But he was too fool-hardy.
    As he rose he saw the sea,
    And said; “That is where I want to be,
    I was born to spend my life at sea,
    Out among the hardy.”

    “Let him be,” they said, “he’s blind
    Let him go and seek his kind
    The gods for him will fair provide
    He is that foolhardy.”

    They that saw could not but laugh,
    At the thought of a life before the mast
    They knew the time for dreams had passed
    But he was too foolhardy.
    His father was himself beside,
    As were his mother and his bride,
    His lunacy they all decried
    Calling him foolhardy.

    “Let him be,” they said, “he’s blind
    Let him go and seek his kind
    The gods for him will fair provide
    He is that foolhardy.”

    Free to work, he made a boat
    And made six more before t’would float
    And when twas done, he came to gloat
    He was that foolhardy.
    He set off fresh that next morn
    And set a course straight for a storm
    Though the others all him did warn
    He was too foolhardy.

    “Let him be,” they said, “he’s blind
    Let him go and seek his kind
    The gods for him will fair provide
    He is that foolhardy.”

    The sky was rent by roar and flash,
    The light of a thousand gods attacked
    But nary a chance that he’d turn back
    He was too foolhardy.
    His hull was rent and bent and smashed,
    His sails torn clear by thunderclap,
    And as he sank still he’d laugh
    He was that foolhardy.

    So come all ye that know the tale
    And mark these words for else you’ll fail
    And join that lad beyond the pale
    In the land of the foolhardy.

    “Let him be,” they said, “he’s blind
    Let him go and seek his kind
    The gods for him will fair provide
    He is that foolhardy!”
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    A really excellent song, I love the language and progression. Would I be wrong in guessing this would be played in a traditional/folk style, the chorus could almost be a shanty.

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    Interesting song. I'm thinking more along the lines of a scottish folk song.
    War is peace. Freedom is slavery. Ignorance is strength.-George Orwell

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