Thread: Surrounded

A walk in the longest night
A road full of knee deep ice
Memories like novel books
In the morning you'll feel alright


Your heart beats as footsteps rise
See the panic in those eyes
Hurt doesn't occur in dreams
Feel the thrash of the real life tide


(Chorus)
Down, so gone from here
Surrounded
Lost and full of fear
Surrounded


Painted pictures of deep blue sky's
The greenest grass to be alive
Minutes last until an hour
You will be gone if you try


Words are mumbled by the breath
Begin to stumble and fail the test
Painless patterns in those eyes
And you leave here a broken mess


(Chorus)
Down, so gone from here
Surrounded
Lost and full of fear
Surrounded


Why won't you evoke yourself?
Surrounded
By a world evolved from us
Surrounded

surrounded. I like the way you've used some of your phrasing. Your language evokes the surrounded feeling, in part because of the repetition of the word "surrounded". This works. What genre do you envision this as? I can see a couple o possibilities.

Thank you. Genre would be alternative rock but it depends on how I'm feeling whilst recording it on what genre I'll fit it into.