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    Dead boys donīt cry

    Iīm too young to be a father
    Go to get an abortion please
    No-one took me seriously
    About the one that should not be

    All I wanted was to have some fun
    But a twist of fate came suddenly
    Heīs just an accident of birth
    True the one that should not be

    PreChorus:
    Donīt cry anymore
    I give you my helping hand
    I said donīt cry anymore
    I give you my helping hand

    A child has a child now I know
    How it feels to be like this
    Oh God what Iīm supposed to do
    With the one that should not be

    How could I take care of you
    When you cannot speak to tell me
    And you donīt understand my words
    You the one that should not be

    PreChorus:
    Donīt cry anymore
    I give you my helping hand
    I said donīt cry anymore
    I give you my helping hand
    If you donīt stop
    I give you my killing hand

    Chorus:
    Because Dead boys donīt cry - oh no
    Dead boys donīt cry – the only way out
    Because Dead boys donīt cry - oh no
    There is no other choice
    Because Dead boys donīt cry – oh no
    Because Dead boys donīt cry

    If you canīt stop crying on your own
    I help you forevermore!

    Mother coming home
    „Honey, Iīm home…Where is our sweetheart baby?...“

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    oh my.

    this is very full of feeling. I dropped out of college to have my first baby but his father was also an adult. My baby is married now and working on his master's. You just gave me an idea for a piece though i don't know if I can write it.

    I like the way you have the protagonist sounding desperate. Babies do cry. And sometimes parents are driven crazy by it. There's a book out -- "Go the F--- to Sleep" I think it's called, that this reminds me of.
    There's nothing like a simile.

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    The desperation of this piece brought tears to my eyes....life can slam us against the wall that's for sure..good piece, Hugo.
    至 高 神 的 孩 子
    Yī zhėgāo shén de háizi


    Nails did not keep our Savior on the cross, love did.
    Can I get an amen...

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    Thank you both for your nice comments.

    Iīm glad these lyrics have an effect on you. Thatīs why I like to write lyrics.

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