A song I wrote awhile back. One of my favorites. Thoughts?

Disclaimer: One use of the 'f' word.

Maybe

-Piano-

So you say
You say it’s worth the fight
I stare on and on
Through my tears
And I look on and on
And I see the faze
I am blinded by the pain

-Frantic build up then guitar-

I swear I’ll be
I’ll be here tonight
To end the pain
The pain of your life
It goes on and on
It’ll destroy your soul

Let’s travel down these roads
These roads that seldom go
Out of the cave
To see the light
So don’t mask your fears
They are never true

So you say
You say it’s worth the fight
I stare on and on
Through my tears
And I look on and on
And I see the faze
I am blinded by the pain

So maybe
I screwed up
So maybe
I fucked up
So maybe
It’s over
So maybe
You’ll grant one chance
So maybe
I can make it right
So maybe
So maybe

So you say
You say it’s worth the fight
I stare on and on
Through my tears
And I look on and on
And I see the faze
I am blinded by the pain

So you say
You say it’s worth the fight
I stare on and on
Through my tears
And I look on and on
And I see the faze
I am blinded by the pain