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    Writer Mr.Tekin's Avatar
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    Beautiful Temple, Beautiful Lie

    -VERSE 1-
    There is a God who helps the footballer
    For reaching his goal, earning more dolar


    There is a world there people are hungry
    In the way of some bread, they die together


    -HOOK-
    I came here to pray
    You know the truths
    My world temple..


    -CHORUS-
    Beautiful temple
    A beautiful lie..
    Oh make me strong
    Don't let me die


    You're here and you know God knows everything
    The children who are poors we live within


    Beautiful temple
    Why God tells the lies?
    Oh they live the stone
    I ask why they cry?


    You're here and you know God does everything
    Or this is a lie...


    -VERSE 2-
    There is a God who is the best writer
    Has prophets, we trust they're teachers


    There is a world, books come from the sky
    Mohammed cuts the moon, no-wing Jesus flies


    -HOOK-
    I came here to pray
    You know the truths
    My world temple..


    -CHORUS-
    Beautiful temple
    A beautiful lie..
    Oh make me strong
    Don't let me die


    You're here and you know God knows everything
    The children who are poors we live within


    Beautiful temple
    Why God tells the lies?
    Oh they live the stone
    I ask why they cry?


    You're here and you know God does everything
    Or this is a lie...

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    This song must invoke some serious thought and discussion from those who hear it. Interesting format. I enjoyed the song, of course I have my own personal values and ideas about God, but I'm not about to discuss that here. Everyone is entitled to their opinions and differences. I really do like this piece, it is very poetic by nature. I'd love to hear it, if you ever have an album to sell.
    Respectfully,
    Andrew Jonius
    "Never settle for mediocrity or the status quo. Strive for excellence in everything you do."
    Dad.​ http:www.feonjonius.info

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    Thank you so much, unfortunalty I'm only a writer and don't even have music for my lyrics.. :/

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    You should collaborate with some musician artists, because this song has potential. I really like it.
    "Never settle for mediocrity or the status quo. Strive for excellence in everything you do."
    Dad.​ http:www.feonjonius.info

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    Writer Mr.Tekin's Avatar
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    Thank you so muchhh

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    Verse 1.

    i just want to let it out
    it does not matter how it sound.
    i know i know its will make different
    if i let it out.

    speak it,if i had to,
    write it,if i had to,
    look around, you can see
    my heart beat.


    feel my heart touch my heart my beat my beat
    oh feel my heart beat.
    feel my heart touch my heart my beat my beat


    Verse 2

    if only you can see my heart
    tell me how do i let you in,

    my heart reflect image you can see
    if only you look deep.

    Chorus
    look deep you can see the
    reflection of my heart,
    feel it touch it just look around.

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    ^^what the hell are you trying to do ?

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