Thread: Beautiful Temple, Beautiful Lie

-VERSE 1-
There is a God who helps the footballer
For reaching his goal, earning more dolar


There is a world there people are hungry
In the way of some bread, they die together


-HOOK-
I came here to pray
You know the truths
My world temple..


-CHORUS-
Beautiful temple
A beautiful lie..
Oh make me strong
Don't let me die


You're here and you know God knows everything
The children who are poors we live within


Beautiful temple
Why God tells the lies?
Oh they live the stone
I ask why they cry?


You're here and you know God does everything
Or this is a lie...


-VERSE 2-
There is a God who is the best writer
Has prophets, we trust they're teachers


There is a world, books come from the sky
Mohammed cuts the moon, no-wing Jesus flies


-HOOK-
I came here to pray
You know the truths
My world temple..


-CHORUS-
Beautiful temple
A beautiful lie..
Oh make me strong
Don't let me die


You're here and you know God knows everything
The children who are poors we live within


Beautiful temple
Why God tells the lies?
Oh they live the stone
I ask why they cry?


You're here and you know God does everything
Or this is a lie...

This song must invoke some serious thought and discussion from those who hear it. Interesting format. I enjoyed the song, of course I have my own personal values and ideas about God, but I'm not about to discuss that here. Everyone is entitled to their opinions and differences. I really do like this piece, it is very poetic by nature. I'd love to hear it, if you ever have an album to sell.
Respectfully,
Andrew Jonius

Thank you so much, unfortunalty I'm only a writer and don't even have music for my lyrics.. :/

You should collaborate with some musician artists, because this song has potential. I really like it.

Thank you so muchhh

Verse 1.

i just want to let it out
it does not matter how it sound.
i know i know its will make different
if i let it out.

speak it,if i had to,
write it,if i had to,
look around, you can see
my heart beat.


feel my heart touch my heart my beat my beat
oh feel my heart beat.
feel my heart touch my heart my beat my beat


Verse 2

if only you can see my heart
tell me how do i let you in,

my heart reflect image you can see
if only you look deep.

Chorus
look deep you can see the
reflection of my heart,
feel it touch it just look around.

^^what the hell are you trying to do ?