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    Gone

    If we were all alone,
    How different would the words you spoke to me be?
    If earth crumbled now
    What is the chance of you setting yourself free?


    These fading memories
    They start up a panic inside of my head
    Lowering my self esteem
    Knowing I'll never be the guy you've once met


    (Chorus)
    Oh and you turn as you walk away
    Those eyes once here are now astray
    As I try to visualise those thoughts
    Everything I'd found is now everything I've lost


    Don't you worry now
    Life goes on and the light flickers away
    Come back any time
    Day or night my heart's opened gates will stay


    A very wise man once said
    It's not the letting go that's hard in life
    It's the keeping on to things
    Keeping on to what you'd guard, your future wife


    (Chorus)
    Oh and you turn as you walk away
    Those eyes once here are now astray
    As I try to visualise those thoughts
    Everything I'd found is now everything I've lost
    Some people say you hate me
    I don't believe it's true
    Things that you're going through

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    Hi there... I felt these lyrics deep inside. I gues everyone has lost, at least one (or more) people in their lives. Very touching. Thanks for sharing.
    When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace ~ Jimi Hendrix

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    Thanks for replying. Yeah, that was the main purpose for writing it really.
    Some people say you hate me
    I don't believe it's true
    Things that you're going through

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    Thanks for sharing that with us - I really felt the emotion behind the song.

    Well done x

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