Thread: A Kiss

I can't begin to pick up from where I left
It's driving me crazy, like they all said it would
Dragging my feet along the ground, head in the clouds
It's not how she said it would be, if only I could see


Time just ain't the same when I spent it all with you
All went by so fast, seemed like a week or two
I was such a jerk, but I'm not prepared to say sorry
I'm not about to lose my pride, don't you worry


(Chorus)
A kiss, it fades, it makes a memory
Feelings they don't last forever
We touch, we part, we deal with misery
Cry with tears, don't cry with rivers


I'm losing you to hell, I didn't give up when you dropped
You're losing me to sickness and all those lies you cropped
I still miss you, the way you said my name
The way you wrapped your arms around me day after day


And I just want to let you know, I hope you're okay
I hope that you'll start to grow up when you realise clouds turn gray
I've pleaded myself to stand up and take it like a man
But when all is said and done it's hard to shake off those soft hands


(Chorus)
A kiss, it fades, it makes a memory
Feelings they don't last forever
We touch, we part, we deal with misery
Cry with tears, don't cry with rivers


A kiss, you kissed, did he taste alright?
Feelings break when you don't abide
We hate, I love, you tell pathetic lies
Shake with fears, not with another side
(Cry with tears, don't pull out the tide)

This is the story of my life. Well done.

Again another song I would listen to if the music were decent. The listener can "Feel" your emotions through your words, the lyrics testify experience. This experience allows the listener to relate, which in turn is the definition of a good song in my opinion. So Good on ya,
Regards
Andrew Jonius