Thread: Du Aßen Meine Lippen (You Ate and Kissed)

This a half german song and I also wrote what does german sentences' mean


- CHOURS -
Du aßen meine Lippen (You ate my lips)
Baby so now I'm stricken
That was only you want about me
Cause you don't know love means
You ate my lips !


- VERSE 1 -
In the club the girls' eyes around you
Baby baby oh you look so cool
Why we had passed so many years I ask you
No answers kissing is only you wanna do


If you want the girls are ready to
Be your babe, don't know why you fool
Why I was in love with you cruel I ask you
No answers oh sex is only you wanna do


- CHOURS -
Du aßen meine Lippen
Baby so now I'm stricken
That was only you want about me
Cause you don't know love means
Because you ate my lips !


And I know
You ate and kissed
(ate and kissed)


- VERSE 2-
I can't hear, baby what you say to me
Baby I'll be just who I wanna be
Set me free, let me livin' what I wanna live
No more asks, baby just leave me


You're my fear, you're in my bed all the day
Be your babe oh that's not my true way
Set me free let me livin' what I wanna live
No more asks baby just don't say


- CHOURS -
Du aßen meine Lippen
Baby so now I'm stricken
That was only you want about me
Cause you don't know love means
Because you ate my lips !


And I know
Cause You ate and kissed
(ate and kissed)


- BRIDGE -
In Deutchland, du aßen meine lippen (In Germany, You ate my lips)
In the club Baby, ich werde kämpfen (I will fight)
it's not for you
Just for myself-esteem


In England, we speak about sex
In the club you just try to kiss
es ist nicht für Sie (And it's not for you)
Just for myself-esteem


- CHOURS -
Du aßen meine Lippen (my lippen)
Baby so now I'm stricken (stricken)
That was only you want about me
Cause you don't know love means
Because you ate my lips ! (means not lips)


And I know
Cause You ate and kissed
(ate and kissed)


Babe you ate and kiiiiisseeeed

Its hard to imagine how it would sound. What genre of music is it? Is it slow or fast? It sounds more like a dance song because the lyrics are simple. I personally enjoy songs that tell stories which is why I love Musiq Soulchild or Stevie Wonder. I want to know what you mean by Ate and kissed. And also if you drew inspiration from a personal relationship. Also have you recorded the song? Listening to it being sung could make it sound waaaaay better. There are dance songs I love to listen to but sound very simple when I read the lyrics.

Also I think some of the grammar sounds off to me. Again it may be because it sounds better when sung or maybe because it was translated from German to English. For example is 'That was only you want about me/Cause you don't know love means' supposed to say 'That was only you, what about me?/Cause you don't know what love means'

Keep on writing... songs are tricky because they have to have meaning and make you feel emotion and want to dance all at the same time.