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    The Queen

    i went to see the queen
    tell her of what ive seen
    tell her i no longer believe
    in fairy tales or dreams
    all childhood's mysterys
    were taken from me


    where did my prince charming go
    he's lost at see
    drifting endlessly
    won't someone help me believe
    in something


    why all the childhood stories
    if nothing comes true
    whats a girl to do
    that once was a princess like you
    tell me where you find the strength
    to look in your daughter's eyes
    when you knew the truth about life

    (song for anyone interested in hearing the timing 71 Stars - The Queen - YouTube )

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    I like the lyrical flow of this and appreciate the feeling of loss of innocence. I can't listen to it -- no headphones and it's four AM here.
    There's nothing like a simile.

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