Thread: Broken Mirrors

This is song number 4 from my lyrics album this song is about love paaiiinn ! the person in the song, tries to forget her pain only just for night, but he'll be in her heart and mind after the night, just like before...

BROKEN MIRRORS

-INPUT-
I find a room in my heart
There are only broken mirrors and my hurts
yeah! but it's locked tonight!

- VERSE 1 -
Baby, tonight in a party's funniest moment
I forget all about you, born again
Baby, alright, if you don't let my movements
Fearly, You'll be my nightmare
But not tonight...

- CHOURS -
On broken mirrors
Thousand faces, black paws fingers that you see
And in my heart hurts
Something endless, black witches' life, it will be

Ohhh broken, m-my broken heart
it's hidden in broken mirrors tonight

- VERSE 2 -
Baby, tonight in the arms and hans of someone
I don't care who is he if you are not
Baby, so white, it's the dress' colour of mine
I'm happy in this crazy marry night
Yes, it's tonight

- CHOURS -
On broken mirrors
Thousand faces, black paws fingers that you see
And in my heart hurts
Something endless, black witches' life, it will be

Ohhh broken, m-my broken heart
it's hidden in broken mirrors tonight

- BRIDGE -
You are my past you're my future
But tonight you're aint my present
Like the old items you're not about to remember
tonight...

- CHOURS -
On broken mirrors
Thousand faces, black paws fingers that you see
And in my heart hurts
Something endless, black witches' life, it will be

Ohhh broken, m-my broken heart
it's hidden in broken mirrors tonight

I liked it, but with lines like "My heart hurts" or "my broken heart", I have a feeling of déjà-vu, as in many many many songs before. Though, I liked the "Thousand faces, black paws fingers that you see" I find the picture powerful enough.
What kind of music are you playing btw?

Thank you Julien..I forgot to tell, I'm actually working on a lyrics album (I hope it will be a music album for someone famous ) and this album includes electro pop songs and one glam rock ballad.Broken Mirrors is an Electro pop song.

Here are the other song names from the album
1 LoveLight
2 The mask
3 Jeanne d'Arc
4 Broken Mirrors
5 Cursed Dance
6 Angel in Danger
7 Speakig dog
8 You ate and Kissed (Du aßen meine Lippen)
9 Last Goodbye to my lost love

It seems a lot of people here write about love pain. That's what brought me here too.