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    You're the one

    this is my
    gift o love....that i bring
    to u my baby girl
    its a package
    filled with mysteries o love..and ecstasy yeh...yeh

    take it
    hold it
    keep it...very dear to your heart
    take it
    hold it
    keep it and never let go of it

    chorus
    you're the one that i live all my life for
    you're the one that's always there in my dreams
    all i want is to be by your side
    you're my moon in the night
    and my sun in the day

    i kneel b4 you
    my queen of beauty
    stretch your hand forth
    and let me kiss it
    tell me your wishes
    and all u desire
    i'll make them come true
    that's all i live for

    you're the one that i live all my life for
    you're the one that's always there in my dreams
    all i want is to be by your side
    you're my moon in the night
    and my sun in the day

    i'll go to the moon
    to fetch you a moon stone
    sail the ,milky way to catch u a comet
    i'll scale the highest mountains and i'll swim the widest seas
    just to see that smile on your face....never seize

    you're the one that i live all my life for
    you're the one that's always there in my dreams
    all i want is to be by your side
    you're my moon in the night
    and my sun in the day

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    Thanks influential, really nice of you to pop in on this. Will record it and post a link soon. Thank you

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    take it
    hold it
    keep it...very dear to your heart
    take it
    hold it
    keep it and never let go of it

    Love this part... too bad it's not repeated again in the song.

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    It is a good write, I do agree with Phyllis, the "take it hold it keep it" part would sound good repeated, overall this is really a nice song.

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    Thanks so much Phyllis and Fossie, Its cool to know your work is appreciated. Will find a way to repeat it.

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