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    Ink Blot
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    Days Fly By

    You're an addiction
    The needle broke off and stuck into my skin
    There's no Program
    No hope for recovery

    The perforated line that connects my heart to my mind
    Is about to be torn in two
    Days just Fly By
    Explode, I just might

    No use filtering out the goodtimes
    Exlpain to me the use in goodbyes
    I keep telling myself 'I'm okay'
    Give me a doognight kiss that lasts for days

    Days just fly by
    Implode, I just might

    Talk about a long distance anesthetic
    I better just forget it
    Because I've been numb from the waist down since you left

    Days just fly by
    Explode, I just might

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    Ink Blot jasonwithwords's Avatar
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    I loved these lyrics. What genre is it? I think when you post a song you should write the genre and style for example an R&B ballad or Country Dance song. Anyway it sounds good but short like a poem. Is there more? Is it just a mini song like a sweet interlude?

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    Apprentice
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    Nice lyrics, I really felt it when reading it.

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    Apprentice
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    I agree with jasonwithwords on the whole genre thing. When I read this, I want to imgaine it just being more of a spoken word type of piece. Maybe a soft or quiet bassline. The lyrics are very good, rich, and I like the sequence it has.

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