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    Fell From Heaven

    Those four hours I walked with you
    Those thousand beats I pumped for you
    Don't you see how amazing you are?

    Every look, every touch
    Every day, every week
    You'll be my star, you'll be my shine

    Honey I love you
    Honey I love you

    And I just can't help figure out
    Where did you come from?
    So beautiful, so sweet, so kind
    You fell from heaven

    There's not one night that passes by
    There's not one day where I don't try
    To make you the happiest girl

    How you light me up when it's dark
    How you change my feelings, it's hard
    To call you babe, cause you're perfect

    Honey I love you
    Honey I love you

    And I just can't help figure out
    Where did you come from?
    So beautiful, so sweet, so kind
    You fell from heaven

    Oh your words they stick with me
    Oh your smile it comforts me
    Wherever I am
    You're always with me

    Shannon I love you
    (Shannon I love you)
    Some people say you hate me
    I don't believe it's true
    Things that you're going through

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    simply and clear lyrics, and I really like the mean which you want to tell with the sentence 'you fell from heaven'

    I wonder what's Shannon mean?

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    Thank you! Shannon was my ex...
    Some people say you hate me
    I don't believe it's true
    Things that you're going through

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    Waow sorry I never thought that was a name of a girl, I thougt that was a jewish word haha

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    Really emotional song. You have used a lot of great words to express your emotions clearly. Keep it up. At the moment I'm writing a song which I hope to post soon.

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