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  1. #1
    Writer
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
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    Ukraine, Kiev
    Posts
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    I need you.

    I'm so fed up with you..
    Your lies mean nothing too..
    I'm so fed up of hearing you're not coming..
    It hurts just knowing

    That you've forgotten!


    I need you..There's magic in this air..
    Midnight's coming..It's bringing all the scare..
    If I would give you all you want..
    I'd be the one who's wrong...
    I need you..12 a.m.

    Your lips right near mine..The End..





    I'm so happy that I have you..
    The little fights mean nothing..
    It's you..who brings me closer.
    And open me inside..
    It hurts just knowing how much
    I love you...


    I need you..There's magic in this air..
    Midnight's coming..It's bringing all the scare..
    If I would give you all you want..
    I'd be the one who's wrong...
    I need you..12 a.m.

    Your lips right near mine..The End..


    I'm so fed up with crying..
    I'm so fed up of trying..
    I'm just so happy that I have you..
    I'm just so happy to be there..




    I need you..There's magic in this air..
    Midnight's coming..It's bringing all the scare..
    If I would give you all you want..
    I'd be the one who's wrong...
    I need you..12 a.m.

    Your lips right near mine..The End..

  2. #2
    Ink Blot
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Posts
    6
    Overall a good piece. I find it difficult to pull a rhythm from it, and the bridge could be tweaked, but overall a good piece.

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