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    Scribe patrick007's Avatar
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    Let Me In

    The questioning of her thoughts
    Is just curropting
    The wavering of her smile
    Too damn severing

    All I want is your need

    I won't fall
    I'll never leave
    Just let me in
    Just let me help

    The bleeding of her new soul
    Is near damaging
    The hurting of her blushing
    Way over heated

    All I care for is you

    I won't fall
    I'll never leave
    Just let me in
    Just let me help

    Let me take your hurting
    Some people say you hate me
    I don't believe it's true
    Things that you're going through

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    Hi I think I have to hear the song with music to really get a feel of how it will sound, I think that the word,
    "curropting" should be corrupting ? /the theme is caring for someone, and is a good theme...

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