Thread: Even

On this bridge of death and then hell
Fondness is dumb, oh clever's stale
Once there was a time we were equal
Once there was a time we had freedom

Oh on that bridge of tenderness
Kindness is gone, loneliness sets
Once there was a place to be equal
Once there was a place to have freedom

(Chorus)
There's no even in this world
There's no even
There's no even

Still on that bridge were darkness met
Evil is normal, we forget
Once there was an age we were equal
Once there was an age we had freedom

Oh on that bridge of tearfullness
Daddy is gone, momentless slips
Once there was a friend who was equal
Once there was a friend who gave freedom

(Chorus)
There's no even in this world
There's no even
There's no even

Even, even, even, even
Even, even, even, even
Even, even, even, even
Even, even, even, even

Patrick I so so like this little piece... Nice repetition... with a subtle variations Should sound very nice musically.....Nicely economical but also says a lot ...))

Thank you, Miriam!

You are more than welcome Patrick. The piece speaks for it self here... I have to say I like it more each time I read it... It feels as if you are mastering the structure and craft of lyric writing very nicely.... A sheer please reading this piece...))