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    Day after Day

    Who cries at night because you're gone?
    Why walk alone with skin of stone?
    You break me when you touch me...
    You feel me when I need it..
    All gone, Left alone..No shoulder to cry on..
    Remember walks, sunsets and beaches,
    The sun that kissed my face so sweetly..

    Consider me forgotten, Your memories are lost,
    No sweet dreams, No sweet talks,
    The water it's dried out of hope..
    The sun no longer shines, it rains .....Day after day...

    Consider me forgotten, Day after day I'm dead and broken..
    Day after day..I'm dead..Day after Day ... I'm broken..


    Who said these painful words ?
    I sat and watched it burn,The picture of us both..
    It faded, (went out this stupid window)..
    Who said we couldn't last?
    It's you, all you..you made it into Past..
    No future just a picture,
    With nothing ...nothing...nothing...

    Consider me forgotten, Your memories are lost,
    No sweet dreams, No sweet talks,
    The water it's dried out of it's hope..
    The sun no longer shines, it rains .....Day after day...

    Consider me forgotten, Day after day I'm dead and broken..
    Day after day..I'm dead..Day after Day ... I'm broken..

    If anyone is asking, I went and took the long way past it..
    Remembering the life I had before I died..
    Remembering those moments,
    These memories aren't worth it...

    Consider me forgotten, Your memories are lost,
    No sweet dreams, No sweet talks,
    The water it's dried out of it's hope..
    The sun no longer shines, it rains .....Day after day...

    Consider me forgotten, Day after day I'm dead and broken..
    Day after day..I'm dead..Day after Day ... I'm broken..
    Last edited by Annie_ch; 09-22-2010 at 07:45 PM.

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    If youc hanged a few lines and had a good rhythms and beat.. i'd cry to this song most every time I hear it..
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    thanx*

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    One thing, I *think* in line 3 you want break rather than brake

    But this is gorgeous, I love it

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