This is a rap I have yet to produce because I need to get my bro K-9 over to record his parts as well. I don't normally write raps that are more "gangster" then they are meaningful but things change when I bring my bros into the game. I believe I censored the only thing I really needed too. If I didn't tell me and I'll censor it

I'm looking for honest feedback. Don't hold back. If you feel like re-writing certain verses go ahead and post the changes you made. I'll take a look. I'm here to improve and grow. This actually was written before I really started getting rhymes down and so it's not as good as some of my newer stuff but this is a lyric I just can't let go to waste.

There are a couple places you can find my produced songs. I will list my Youtube and myspace because I have yet to update myspace with two new songs currently on my Youtube.

Myspace
Youtube (featured video is set to auto play. Just a warning.)

[K-9]
(We're under heavy fire, holy shit!)
(Arm the nuke,Damn it, Arm that damn thing!)

[Balhaze]

[Verse 1]
Ayo Betta open up those ears
Raising up this is our reintroduction
We aint gonna shed no more tears
It's our time to exact our retribution

[Verse 2]
Cha keepin us down in the dirt
Aint ever gonna let us raise fists
Neva let us stand on our own merit
We got a whole buncha names on hit lists
Aint neva been to Detroit
Leavin your bodys defaced with slits

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
Purely a lack of authority in our veins
Sick of being unjustly oppressed
(The AK's are loaded)
Takin ya by these long forgotten reins
Ya gonna be so damn unforgettably impressed
(Ayo! Don't forget the 9's!)
Leavin your mighty fortresses in ruins
Feelin what it's like to be unblessed

[K-9]
(yo,yo,cut the beat! Man down!)
(___ this shit, strap me with tha AK!)

[K-9]
[Verse 1]
Ayo this shit is whack
My niggas dodging bullets every which way
I don't think we can make it back
Just gotta cross the causeway

[Verse 2]
This is the end of the rope
Tieing it round your necks in a noose
Ready to fire got ya heads in our scopes
Aint no body gonna hear no ____ noise
We be rebuilding society in these briny deep coves

[Chorus]
Ayo those ears better be fully exposed
Now that you've heard our reintroduction
Something deeply disturbed you've provoked
I guess it's bout time for that retribution

[Verse 3]
This is one big juicy ____ you to the illuminati
Hiding behind their smoke and mirrors nicknamed government
Actin like the godly holy almighty trinity
I hope you sick ___ get it now this is our movement
troop movements won't end not till half pass infinity
Sound of your skulls crackin upon the shattered pavement



[Verse 4]
How can you live with these demons
Claiming to be the new world order
____ it you aint gonna take down my demo
Cuz ya'll seem like you got a disorder
Unlike ya we aint running outta ammo
You aint gonna be our distorter

[Bridge]
Ayo I'm fairly sure those ears are fully exposed
Now that you've heard our reintroduction
[K-9]
(once,twice,thrice!)
Something deeply disturbed you've provoked
[K-9]
(once,twice,thrice,Shame on me!)
I guess it's bout time for that retribution
[K-9]
(Once,twice,Thrice,haha, what a farce!)

[Chorus]
Ayo those ears better be fully exposed
Now that you've heared our reintroduction
Something deeply disturbed you've prevoked
I guess it's bout time for that retribution