Thread: My Love

[To my daughter, whenever you are born] I've been looking for inspiration in the wrong places, lately. I'm glad i'm on the right track for now until the next crossroad.

gonna carry you on my back
gonna hold you in my arms
gonna sing you sweet ol' lullaby's
gonna right you from wrong

i'll push away them bad dreams
i'll be patting your back all night long
i'm gonna burp you loudly my baby
gonna hold you in my arms

and when that day comes a rising
that i'll have to let you go
baby, i just want you to know that
i will stay here for you
it truly is a harsh world
somethings just aren't as true
as the relationship between me and you

[oooohhh oooohhh oooohhh ooohhh]
gonna carry you on my back
gonna hold you in my arms
gonna sing you sweet ol' lullaby's
gonna right you from wrong

now that you're all grown up
i bet you don't have time for me
pretty soon i'll be checking out
so baby can't you see
it's always been, you and me
it's always been, you and me
it's always been, you and me
it's always been, you and me
i'm gonna love you till the end.

Song is played in C major, Tuning (dropped D)

This is gorgeous

Might just be me, but the only bit I didnt like was the word burp in it...I dont know why really except that the rest of it is so beautiful and it seems a bit crass

haha, i was thinking about how when you have to pat your child's back so they can burp. that's the only reason i put it in. oh and what do you mean by crass?

hmmm maybe I dont mean crass

I guess 'burp' is a less poetic word than the others you used, and it seemed to me a little out of place.

But that's just my taste

i mean't what does crass mean? other than that, i'm still working on changing that line. i too feel that it's a bit out of place. as for now, i'll work with it. [:

In response to your inquiry "CRASS" = insensitive, tactless, stupid, obtuse, inane , ridiculous, gross, blundering, asinine and/ or vulgar along with any number of words that would basically mean as such...)

Just replace the word "love" for "burp"....this is not a big deal....The thought process of LOVING someone loudly has much more of an emotional impact than "burping" anyone..... baby or anything.))