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    Short cut through cemetery

    What the hell are you doing here?
    Itīs just moonlight night but you donīt care
    You are going careless without fear
    Creatures of the night are waiting everywhere

    Iīm not coward I want to be
    In short time at home to go to bed
    So Iīll take a short cut through cemetery
    Donīt try to sow doubts into my head

    Bridge 1:
    The graves are opening
    You see skeletons
    Who are rising

    Chorus:
    Tower clock is striking midnight
    Welcome to night scenery
    You will see incredible fright
    On your way through cemetery

    Meanwhile you are praying on your knees
    You can forget about the sleep in your bed
    Itīs time to meet some nice zombies
    To become one of them undead

    Bridge 2:
    The graves are open
    You see skeletons
    Who are rotten

    Chorus:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hugozhor View Post
    What the hell are you doing here?
    Itīs just a moonlit night but you donīt care
    You are going careless without fear
    Creatures of the night are waiting everywhere

    Iīm not coward I want to be
    In short time at home to go to bed
    So Iīll take a short cut through cemetery
    Donīt try to sow doubts into my head

    Bridge 1:
    The graves are opening
    You see skeletons
    Who are rising

    Chorus:
    Tower clock is striking midnight
    Welcome to night scenery
    You will see incredible fright
    On your way through cemetery

    Meanwhile you are praying on your knees
    You can forget about the sleep in your bed
    Itīs time to meet some nice zombies
    To become one of them undead

    Bridge 2:
    The graves are open
    You see skeletons
    Who are rotten

    Chorus:
    The first red-highlighted text is corrected, but with the second you need something between 'not' and 'coward'. I didn't correct it because it could be 'a', or 'the', depending on how you perceived the line.

    I have to ask, is this supposed to be a comic song? I ask because of lines like:

    Itīs time to meet some nice zombies
    "*This is the mash* It is the monster mash *The monster mash*"

    EDIT: I'll comb through the whole thing when I know which approach you're taking with it (comical, serious, etc.)

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    Thank you for your advice. About indefinite article. Sometimes I donīt use article because itīs lyrics for song not book and many bands leave articles out in their lyrics. This is a comic song.

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