Thread: Catch me

I catch myself looking for you ...
Everytime you're not around I feel so unfull

Hearing someone say your name
It's like splitting in two,
One side says it's painful

Other says it too..

Catch me on this thought
My zombie-loving mind is taking off .
Catch me when I fall..
Mountains aren't high enough to brake us off..

Catch me when I'm lost..
Thinking about thoughts..
Catch me when I'm down .
Catch me when I'm up...

Would you catch me?

I stare and think about what it'd be like
No tears dropping and no stupid eyes...
Could you tell me why?

It's not me...

Catch me on this thought .
My zombie-loving mind is taking off ..
Catch me when I fall ,
Mountains aren't high enough to brake us off..

Catch me when I'm lost..
Thinking about thoughts..
Catch me when I'm down .
Catch me when I'm up...

Would you catch me?

If I ever find a way..

If you ever say ok!!

I'll love you .
.I won't lie..

You will catch me ,
I'll fly ..

Catch me on this thought .
My zombie-loving mind is taking off ,
Catch me when I fall ..
Mountains aren't high enough to brake us off..

Catch me when I'm lost..
Thinking about thoughts..
Catch me when I'm down ,
Catch me when I'm up...



Would you catch me?

I like this song. It makes me smile.

Say you'll catch me
and I'll fly.

It's well inspired and directed. but difficult to understand. I don't know if you need commas, double spacing, capital perhaps. Something to add emphasis on certain syllables.
I'd change minor things. such as the bold*. instead of 'You catch me I'll fly' which even like so would do nicely with an 'and' between the me - I'll.

Sorry Arc, but an "and" in there would make it sound as though she would fly after being caught, a comma maybe, I see where you are coming from.

My mistake, i just forgot the comma)
but thanks for noticing)