Heaven or Hell

**Hugozhor** · 08-04-2010, 02:56 PM

There are just two places to come
When you are leaving and you´re gone
Heaven is for all god slavers
And Hell is for evil sinners
It´s been and it´s going to be…for you and me

Bridge 1:
It´s easy to believe something
That´s nice fairytale
It must be really amazing
To the other side to sail

Chorus:
Heaven or Hell - there is no place when we are leaving
Heaven or Hell - it´s make of our thoughts
Heaven or Hell - on our Earth we are creating
Heaven or Hell - it´s our choice

Heaven or Hell is here and now
Not up above or down below
Which an empire is ruling
It depends on our doing
There are just devils and angels…but among us

Bridge 2:
Stop thinking of life after death
Wake up of dreaming
We can create Heaven on Earth
During our living

Chorus:

Believe me it´s not a lie
As it is you´re gonna die

Have a nice afterlife in Heaven or Hell

**Annie_ch** · 08-04-2010, 03:27 PM

There are some mistakes like "That´s nice fairytale" .it's supposed to be "That's a nice fairytail". "it´s make of our thoughts" supposed to be "It's made (out) of our thoughts"

"Which an empire is ruling" just cut out the AN..

what is the genre of this song?

**Olly Buckle** · 08-04-2010, 04:07 PM

Sorry, but I think you are wrong about fairytale, tale, story, not tail like you stick on the donkey, you are right about made rather than make, it should also be 'are' made I think, I know it is heaven or hell, which is only one, but it's one of the pair.

**Hugozhor** · 08-05-2010, 01:22 PM

Thank you both for mistakes. Fairytale is right. About "make" I mean a noun „make“ no adjective it´s „made „ maybe would be better „it´s a work of our thoughts“

**Hugozhor** · 08-05-2010, 01:23 PM

This is faster rock song.

**ronnycarson** · 08-06-2010, 03:57 AM

I'm working on a short story that revolves around the same concept (and has the same name), so I can definitely see the mindstate you're coming from with this song.